Blog 6.5

What do I think about the essay?

I think it was okay, but somethings could have been left out. Having things explained from things like terrorism and other countries didn’t have a good way in the flow. Things like basketball and L.A. really shouldn’t be in the there. Giving examples from modern day day was not a good idea because it was suppose to be about the Constitution. Having more of a transition from one topic to another needs better work.

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