Conclusion rough draft
Police thinks that they can step on us citizens and we won’t do anything about it. Police acting like soldiers is only the start of it. If we let them, treat other people like African american people like crap then we are living in a bad country. The reason people are rioting is because the police is really attacking the African american ethnic group. In the distant future there will be a war between police and the African american ethnic group and other will get hurt or killed in that mess. Police have more of a fighting chance because they received better equipment to fight back and hold up in a battle. If people aren’t concerted now then in a few years it will turn to may-ham. Plus the police will not stop there, they will try to tell everyone what can and be done. Taking over mite be one of there plans and also having a martial law in effect for people. If you aren’t censored right now later think how the future will be if your policeman is in soldier outfit pointing a gun at you.
Take a hard copy of someone’s paper and make notes of the structure. Put outline symbols in the margins.
Show the person your results and discuss
Post a formal outline of your friends paper as a new blog
How to structure
Most important point is at the end.
Most important point comes first b/c reader gets tired
Start with a big idea and narrow it.
Start with an narrow example and then consider bigger things
Cause and effect scenario- use hedging words like “probably” or “something”
Why does mu project matter?
What would the world be like if we thought this way?
Imagine a scenario
Connect that scenario to our argument
State out thesis
Write a rough draft of your introduction, using thimell’s work as a model
You are cop that is trying to take down a lot of robbers at a bank. You are equip with an assault rifle, grenades, gas mask, height-end protection vest, and a rolling “tank” vehicle.As you run over things in the street you kill one of the robbers and crash your vehicle into a building.Having left your vehicle you run into the bank and gun down a robber. Trowing down some tear gas and then getting shot at, your vest taking a lot of bullets you run back to your vehicle. Seeing that the robber chased you to your car you get out and from above gun then down with the attached machine gun. The u. s police station are getting some of this gear.
Wrote a research paper- Chernobyl
Organized a blog
Propose a project
Give each other feedback
Explored a topic and narrows it
Take quizzes on material
read a different article by rickert
Complete an annoyed bib.
Synthesize your sources opinions
Possible: Outline of Major Project
- Introduction(2 paragraphs)
A. Personal Story
B.Purpose and thesis
2. Background Info
3. Point 1
4. Point 2 ( Same structure)
6. Point 4(same)
Opposing views(2 to 3 paragraphs)
A. Review main points
B. Guess at the future
We should use pop culture in out research
- Shows us a concrete example of out topic
- Offers hypothetical solutions to problems
- Makes the topic rotatable to the audience
Compose one paragraph in which you discuss how your topic has appeared in pop culture in some way.
In Ferguson, Missouri after a shooting happened, riots started. Police in that town had to calm things down. Angle Cop is a Japanese magma movie that talks about police officers having military weapons to protect themselves and others. Battlefield Hard line is a video game that is based of cops and robbers using high end guns.